温州中考英语作文

近三年温州中考作文

仔细阅读中考英语作文及范文，思考：中考作文的要求是什么？

2011：假如你叫刘宏，你学校每年都在世界水日（World Water Day）开展丰富多彩的活动，宣传节约用水，你的笔友Jim所在的学校也要开展类似活动，请你写信向他介绍你们的活动情况（活动内容见下表）。 活动时间：3月22日

参加人员：全校师生

活动形式：1.表演短剧 2.演讲比赛 3.制作海报 4.……

活动目的：告诉人们水的重要性、浪费水的危害、节约用水的方法…

活动感受：……

要求：

1. 短文应包括表中所有的要点，课适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；

3. 文章长度；约100词（不包含已给的词数）。

参考词汇：take part in, put on short plays, speech competition, make poster, helpful, save, waster Dear Jim,

Nice hearing from you. Let me tell you what we often do on World Water Day. On March 22nd all the teachers and students of the school take part in different activities.

Lots of students put on short plays. Some plays are funny, and they show us wasting water is bad for humans. Many students take part in the speech competition. They tell us what we should do to save water. Some teachers and students make posters and put them up in the school and neihborhood. In this way, more people know the World Water Day and join us.

All these activities are helpful. More and more people know the importance of water and begin to save it. Maybe you do the same.

2012

61. 某英文网站提出“走路去上学”的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约100词的英语文章：内容包括，走路有利健康，和朋友结伴有利于……让父母节省……使城市……等等;可适当发挥。 注意：文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇：be good for, with friends, save

I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.

2013：

初中的生活即将结束，一项调查结果显示很多同学想在考试后去旅游，但是也有同学不喜欢旅游。请以“Traveling is----”为题写一篇约100词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。

要求：

1）先把题目补充完整（可用interesting，boring等）；

2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考范文1：

Traveling is interesting

Traveling is interesting. You will have lots of fun things to do and see during the trip. Just imagine that you are walking in the beautiful mountains, enjoying the fresh air and listening to the birds singing. It’s amazing, isn’t it? Sometimes, you may meet people from different places and make friends with them, which makes your trip a more pleasant oe. Also, you may have many interesting things to share with your friends when you are back. All the pleasure of your trip will be kept in your memory. It’s not surprising that so many students can’t wait to go traveling after the examination!

参考范文2：

Traveling is boring

Traveling is usually boring. There are always too many people in places of interest in China and it is crowded everywhere, especially on holidays. Just imagine that you are waiting in line, hungry and thirsty. “Why do I come here? To see the crowd?”you may complain. If you are unlucky , you may meet a bad guide who pushes you to shop here and there. It’s terrible, isn’t it? Also, you may have to get up early to take the plane or wait in the airport for hours because of the delayed flight. Therefore, I prefer to stay at home than go traveling after the examination

卷面和层次是第一印象

写对是一切的基础，不能出现致命的错误卷面和层次是第一印象

What to write?

What else should you write about? (不要刻意，要自然----客观，逻辑顺畅；“1+1”的思路：提示的+ 原因，结果，感受等。)

评论性的文章要客观，要有较深层次的分析

叙事性文章完整性，连贯性，情感性 ------

How to write?

18分作文的标准是什么？

无错误

信息全

On March 22nd； all the teachers and students ； put on short plays； the speech competition； make posters ；

More and more people know the importance of water

有发挥

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How to write better?

加点文采：

常用句型的运用：too--- to---; so--- that---; not only --- but also---;

感叹句

定语从句

连接词的运用

连接词(插入语)---顺畅出彩！

时间性： First of all / At first , And then, At last / Finally; As soon as, Little by little ---

情感性：To my surprise, What a pity! What a pain!Luckily / Unluckily, Sadly , What was worse ，

例举性：For example , As for, Such as,-----

语气性： To be honest , after all , In fact,

As we know, Of course , -----

让句子出彩！

He is a good boy. He likes reading. He spends enough time on books.

What a good boy he is! He enjoys reading and spends enough time on time.

He is a god boy who likes reading. He was so enjoyable that he spends enough time on books.

简单的句子让其不简单，要酝酿。

出彩在于锦上添花，不刻意！