三步七环节日记指导

英语日记的写作指导

【学习目标】： 1.记日记的格式

2.日记中日期和天气的表达

3.正文书写的要求

学案

一．【自主预习】：

1.一月__________ 2.二月__________ 3.三月__________

4.四月__________ 5.五月__________ 6.六月__________

7.七月__________ 8.八月__________ 9.九月__________

10.十月__________ 11.十一月__________ 12.十二月__________

13.星期一__________ 14.星期二__________ 15.星期三__________

16.星期四__________ 17.星期五__________ 18.星期六__________

19.星期日__________ 20.晴朗的__________ 21.多雨的__________

22.多雪的__________ 23.多风的__________ 24.阴的__________

二．【合作探究】：

问题：你知道日记该怎么写吗？格式是怎样的？有什么要求？

三．【问题解决】

学生回答，答对加分（教师酌情）。

四．【教师点拨】：

1. 注意日期、星期和天气的书写位置：

日期和星期要写在正文的左上角，其顺序多是“星期 + 月、日、年”，也有把星期放在后面的，如“ 2003 年 11 月 22 日，星期一”可写为“ Monday November 22， 2003 或 November 22， 2003 Monday ”。天气情况应写在正文的右上角。

2. 关于标题的书写。

在日期和天气的下一行中间可以写上日记小标题， 命题日记将日记的标题写s上，如果不是命题日记也可以不写标题。

3．在第三行空两格开始写日记的正文，一般写日记直接切入主题。

4.关于正文的书写。

在书写正文时要做到：

( 1 )写在星期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间 ( 2 )日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用第一人称来写； ( 3 )由于记载的内容通常已经发生，谓语动词多用一般过去时。但也可根据具体情况，用其它时态。如：记叙天气、描写景色，为了描写生动，可以使用现在时，以表现当时的情景。再如文后发表感想或评论可用现在时态或将来时态。

作文范例展示：

[一]．

March 12th，2003，Tuesday Sunny

Today is Tree Planting Day. At 7∶30 in the morning，all the students in our class met at the school gate. We walked to the park. Miss Gao and other teachers went and worked with us. All the students worked very hard，and we planted about 200 trees. Though we were dirty and tired，we still felt very happy.

[二]．

February 5th Friday Rainy In my dream

Last night ,I dreamed I became a very beautiful bird.I dreamed that I was in a forest. In the forest,there were a lot of animals.Then,an old bird told us,"we have a very beautiful forest,we should therefore protect it from pollution."All the animals agreed with him.

But the second day,people came into our forest.Many animals were caught.The people wanted to build house and parks in our forest.Many old trees were felled.And then suddenly,nothing was left standing.

I was so shocked ，I woke up at midnight.It was only a dream.

[三].

January 13 2010

It was the first day of our winter holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.

[四]．

September 1st，2004 sunny

It was sunny and hot today. I got up early at half past six. I read English and then had breakfast. I helped my mother washed the dishes. Then I did my homework and cleaned my room. I went shopping with my mother in the afternoon. Then I played table tennis with my friends. In the evening I watched TV and read a book. I really had a busy and interesting day.

【五】课堂小练:课堂写一篇日记，不少于80个单词

【六】学生展示：

让个别学生朗读自己写的文章，大家共同分享。

【七】小结与作业:

修改课堂日记的初稿，回家进行定稿。

预习下课所学内容。