高中作文改进学案

2016届高二下第1次月考作文学案 Name： Class:

Better school, better life

Nowadays, we come to the new school to study. This is a school 1._______

which is very beautiful and full of the fresh air.In this school, I can 2._______

study and grew better. During half of this year, I got through many things. 3._______

Although there are many difficulties, I still think life is nicer. 4.________

Last term, we had a big exam. I felt very nervous at the exam because 5.________

I often did bad in it and I am not confident. However, I still study hard. 6.________

After the exam, it was very surprised that I got great grades and made great 7.________

progress. My teacher smiled and said to me that “ You can do better and you 8._______

are very clever.” When I saw my paper, I thought it is impossible and I felt 9._______

happy. It was the first time that I had felt successful. Not only I feel pleasant 10.______

but also my parents are pround of me. 11._______ As an old saying goes, “No cross, no crown.” I believe I will hold my dream

and still be hardworking. I’ll get better grades just like what my teacher says. 12.______

Nowadays, we come to the new school to study. This is a school which is very beautiful and full

of fresh air. In this school, I can study and grew better.(用定语从句整合信息)

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During half of this year, I got through many things. Although there were many difficulties, I still

think life is nicer.(用强调句型提升表现力,并且注意引出下文)

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______________________________________________________________________________ Last term, we had a big exam. I felt very nervous in the exam because I often did badly in it and I am not confident.(将信息具体化，尝试高级词汇）

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ However, I still study hard. After the exam, it was very surprising that I got great grades and made great progress. (可以生动刻画经历，如考试怎样沉着，细致，成绩多少等。尝试非谓语形式，状语从句等）

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My teacher smiled and said to me，“ You can do better and you are very clever.” When I saw my paper, I still thought it was impossible and I felt happy. It was the first time that I had felt successful. Not only did I feel pleased but also my parents are proud of me.

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(尝试用2个较长的复合句包含所有的内容,；除了happy咱没别的词了吗？可否来个比喻句）

As an old saying goes, “No cross, no crown.” I believe I will hold my dream and will still be

hardworking. I’ll get better grades just like what my teacher says.（能否加深感受的深度，只是分数的提高吗？对于人生的启示是什么呢？）

Stay foolish, stay __________.

2016届高二下第1次月考作文学案 Name： Class:

Stay foolish, stay __________.