4月11雅思写作机经

4月11雅思写作机经

解析：本次雅思小作文是两篇动态图，难度偏低。

参考开头：

The two diagrams illustrate the details and give projections to the number of vehicle and CO2 emissions in England and Wales from 2000 to 2020

Key features:

1)从2000到2010,vehicle number 持续增长，并从2000起更高的增长率出现。预计到2020年，vehicle number 超过60million

2)car是CO2主要排放源，从2000年的2.2tones增至2010年的2.7tones. 预计在2020年攀升至3tones

4月11雅思写作机经

3)Truck CO2排放第二大，从2000到2020年同样预计增加（从0.7tone到1.3tone)

4)Van 排放第三，从2000年0.5tone到2010年0.7tone, 未来10年预计不变。Bus最干净，仅从2000年的0.3tone增长2010的0.4tone, 预计在未来保持不变。

参考结尾：

Vehicle number sees a persistent increase between 2000 and 2020. Car is always the main culprit of CO2 emission while bus remains the cleanest vehicle during the 20 years.

4月11雅思写作机经

解析：本次大作文是报告文, 审题有一定难度。要求写老年人参与求职竞争可能导致的后果及解决措施。

首段：Identify and paraphrase the problem:

Because of financial dilemmas or simply resulted from higher career pursuit,quite a large number of elderly people returns to the working market and competes the job opportunities with the younger candidates. Although the action has many negative repercussions to the society, some effective measures can be done to better the situation.

4月11雅思写作机经

第二段：problem caused:

More elderly people entering job market threatens the employments of many younger people, leading to higher jobless rate in younger population. Since older people are obviously more advantageous in terms of experience,professional knowledge,and leading skills, employers would give more preferences to the older candidates than younger ones when recruiting. If young adults find it increasing pressured to get hired, it inevitably leads to to the instability of the society. Crime rate is expected to rise due to the indignation and pressures faced in the young. Another problem lies in the physical health of these older employees. When older people engage on works, they are meant to face job pressures and sometimes long working hours, which can have huge negative effects on their longevity.

第三段：measures:

Nevertheless, some solutions can be taken to prevent the returns of older people. First of all, older people can be encouraged to enjoy their life after retirement instead of continuing their career via media propaganda. Some entertainment facilities for elders can be established to enrich retirement life and dispel their loneliness. Older people would be reluctant to extend their career path when they find many joys in their retirements. Besides, if older people choosing to work is caused by financial pressures, that government increases the amount of pension and enhances the social welfare is the very recipe. A strong pension and social welfare system ensures a good retirement life and avoid the necessity of reemployment.

末段总结

Overall, the society should always go as it should be.That is, older people are supposed to leave more opportunities to younger generations. if older people replace the position that is normally taken by young adults, the society can hardly advances sustain ably.

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