201501高三写作范文

My Best Deskmate

I have had many deskmates since I began school. Among them, the best one was Jack, who was very kind, patient and helpful.

Jack was my deskmate two years ago, when we studied in Senior Grade One. I remember he looked after me very well when I fell ill. He took me to hospital to see a doctor. When we entered the high school, my English was very poor while he was very good at English. He helped me learn it every day. When I met any difficulty, he tried his best to help me overcome it. When I lost confidence, he would give me an encouragement in time. With his kind help, I made great progress in English.

I thank Jack very much. Although we are not in the same class now, we still keep in touch. So he is also one of my best friends.

My Best Deskmate

I have had many deskmates since I began school. Among them, the best one was Jack, who was very kind, patient and helpful.

Jack was my deskmate two years ago, when we studied in Senior Grade One. I remember he looked after me very well when I fell ill. He took me to hospital to see a doctor. When we entered the high school, my English was very poor while he was very good at English. He helped me learn it every day. When I met any difficulty, he tried his best to help me overcome it. When I lost confidence, he would give me an encouragement in time. With his kind help, I made great progress in English.

I thank Jack very much. Although we are not in the same class now, we still keep in touch. So he is also one of my best friends.

My Best Deskmate

I have had many deskmates since I began school. Among them, the best one was Jack, who was very kind, patient and helpful.

Jack was my deskmate two years ago, when we studied in Senior Grade One. I remember he looked after me very well when I fell ill. He took me to hospital to see a doctor. When we entered the high school, my English was very poor while he was very good at English. He helped me learn it every day. When I met any difficulty, he tried his best to help me overcome it. When I lost confidence, he would give me an encouragement in time. With his kind help, I made great progress in English.

I thank Jack very much. Although we are not in the same class now, we still keep in touch. So he is also one of my best friends.

My Best Deskmate

I have had many deskmates since I began school. Among them, the best one was Jack, who was very kind, patient and helpful.

Jack was my deskmate two years ago, when we studied in Senior Grade One. I remember he looked after me very well when I fell ill. He took me to hospital to see a doctor. When we entered the high school, my English was very poor while he was very good at English. He helped me learn it every day. When I met any difficulty, he tried his best to help me overcome it. When I lost confidence, he would give me an encouragement in time. With his kind help, I made great progress in English.

I thank Jack very much. Although we are not in the same class now, we still keep in touch. So he is also one of my best friends.

My Best Deskmate

I have had many deskmates since I began school. Among them, the best one was Jack, who was very kind, patient and helpful.

Jack was my deskmate two years ago, when we studied in Senior Grade One. I remember he looked after me very well when I fell ill. He took me to hospital to see a doctor. When we entered the high school, my English was very poor while he was very good at English. He helped me learn it every day. When I met any difficulty, he tried his best to help me overcome it. When I lost confidence, he would give me an encouragement in time. With his kind help, I made great progress in English.

I thank Jack very much. Although we are not in the same class now, we still keep in touch. So he is also one of my best friends.

My Best Deskmate

I have had many deskmates since I began school. Among them, the best one was Jack, who was very kind, patient and helpful.

Jack was my deskmate two years ago, when we studied in Senior Grade One. I remember he looked after me very well when I fell ill. He took me to hospital to see a doctor. When we entered the high school, my English was very poor while he was very good at English. He helped me learn it every day. When I met any difficulty, he tried his best to help me overcome it. When I lost confidence, he would give me an encouragement in time. With his kind help, I made great progress in English.

I thank Jack very much. Although we are not in the same class now, we still keep in touch. So he is also one of my best friends.

主要问题：

1. 审题不到位。没有突出my, best。有的学生写成了my deskmate。写了与主题无关的东西，外表，外向，上课积极。

2. 动词时态观念不强。过去的事用了现在时，或现在的事用了过去时。

3. 写作时，边写边涂改。学生单词书写有态，间隔有待加强。