六级作文2

　　Working in West China

　　In current society , we are facing an increasingly severe employment pressure . While most people are flooding to coastal cities , causing oversupply of talents there , western regions of China are confronted with shortage of talents . Should we take jobs in the coastal area or the western area ? This issue has aroused debate nowadays .(描述问题现象，引入正文)

　　Some people assert that we should find a job in the western area . In the first place , compared with the talent surplus in the coastal area , it is easier for people to find a place in West China . In addition , since living expense in West China is not as high as in the east , people are able to live under less pressure and enjoy a more comfortable life .

　　However , others insist that we should work in developed costal area and they have their points too . Coastal area definitely offers more job opportunities for the youth , especially positions with high salary and global vision .（上两段分别表述对立面的观点和依据）

　　Personally , I totally understand the potential of the western area , but since we are still young , it is worth struggling and competing with other talents in the coastal area . （最后陈述了自己观点和依据） 下一篇结构类似，可以具体看看它的句子结构，加以模仿

　　Addiction to Internet Games

　　Every afternoon during the summer vacation, hundreds of

　　thousands of teenagers pour into Internet bars. They switch on a

　　computer, and indulge themselves in a fantasy world playing games such as World of War craft and Counter Strike.

　　As everyone knows, playing Internet games can do much harm to teenagers if they spend too much time in the virtual world. Firstly, it is an enormous waste of time and teens will have little time for their study. Secondly, those who play video games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of adequate sleep. Thirdly, teenagers’ social ties will suffer as a result of the immersion in the virtual world.

　　In my opinion, the whole society should pay more attention to this problem, especially the parents and the game industry. Besides, the youth shouldn't’t spend too much time, energy or money on the Internet because study is their priority. In conclusion, the youth should make good and proper use of the Internet.