刘素兰 短文改错

千锤百炼，决胜改错

一、高考短文改错题的特点：

短文改错题的语言材料通常取材于考生自己的作品或类似于考生的随笔，且话题常见，

篇章结构的难易程度符合考生的写作水平，基本上无生僻的语言障碍和偏、怪、难的语句结构。

二、高考短文改错题的改错角度：

1. 词法

2. 句法 （主谓一致，特殊句式，并列句，复合句）

3. 行文逻辑 （上下逻辑，肯定，否定）

锤炼篇

一）、词法考查

1、名词：

1)And I came to understand that knowledges could change my life.

2) But one and a half year later, I now think…

3)My grandma was the best cooker in the world.

4)when I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy.

5)He stopped at a box of ball for Christmas trees.

2、冠词

1）According to program, we will plant different kinds of trees .

2）We have made a great progress.

3）My teacher advised me to keep my diary .

4) We had a great fun singing and dancing.

5) It is such great hotel that I will recommend it to others.

6) How interesting book I have read!

3、代词

1) I liked English and computer best and I was very good at it.

2) That car of me is always breaking down.

3) The other day my brother and me went to the cinema by bike.

4) People need a place where they can rest and enjoy them.

5) He made that a rule to go for a walk before breakfirst.

4、形容词、副词

1）It is real a good chance to have met all of you here.

2) The population of China is more than that of America.

3) The farm workers gave us a warmly welcome.

4) What's more, it will become necessarily to build gates and walls.

5、介词

1) I was born in Hangzhou on February 1977.

2) They would not have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money.

3) I hope you will come and visit our school by yourself some day.

4) It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8.

6、动词（时态，语态，短语，非谓语）

1）I also shared with my friends many photos taking in Beijing.

2）Pointed to a policeman not far away, the young man explained.

3) This is the first time we had seen a film in this cinema.

4) On the box was a card say: “25 cents each.”

5) I noticed Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman.

6) For the most part, students working to earn money for their own use.

7) Did you predict that many students will sign up for the dance competition?

8) Hardly have I got home when the rain poured down.

9) He has no choice but meet an even grater challenge.

10) Time, is used correctly, is money in the bank.

11) Glaire had her luggage checking an hour before her plane left.

12) Be careful when cross the street.

二）.句法考查

1. 主谓一致

1) On one side of the main road, there are a new classroom building .

2) The only clothes I had was those I had on.

3) Tom as well as his friends were invited to the party.

4) The singer and dancer are to attend our evening party.

5) The number of the students from the north are small.

2. 特殊句式

1) I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.

2) No sooner had I arrived home when it began to rain.

3) Knocking at the door before you enter my room, please.

4) Not until he left his home he begin to know how important the family was for him.

5) It was two years since he came back from abroad.

3. 并列连词but, and, so, or

1) Clever as she is, but she works very hard.

2) Early in the morning we met at the school gates and go there together.

3) In them there are all kinds of books, newspapers or magazines.

4.复合句

1）Mother is cooking for us, as father is sitting doing nothing.

2) Before long they began to see which was happening.

3）The moment when I heard the voice, I knew father was coming.

4) Whatever interesting the film is,I won’t waste time on it.

三）. 逻辑意义的考查

主要包括句子的肯定、否定、上下文逻辑关系等

1) In American big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.

2)“ We’ve found you at last,” they said. Or we didn’t know them.

3) We drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear.

三、做好短文改错的方法：

1. 掌握尽可能多的英语知识；

2. 答题时先易后难；

3. 掌握高考短文改错题1：1：8的规律，即：缺词1个，多词1个，错词8个；

4. 答题时别忘了从以下几点着眼：

词法 （冠词，名词，代词，介词，形容词，副词，动词）

句法 （主谓一致，特殊句式，并列句，复合句）

行文逻辑 （上下逻辑，肯定，否定）

实战篇（一）

When I was in high school, I had an awful experience. At that time I was so brave and outgoing as the others. Because of that, a boy name Big Tom would do all kinds of bad things to me. I was scaring to see him. So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited me to dine out. I agreed. We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went well. By the end of that night, Big To apologized for what he has done to me. Now we have become close friends. In our life, everyone may make mistakes. What counts most are that we have the courage to correct them.

实战篇（二）

In October 13,2011, Wang Yue, a two-year-old little girl, is playing on the street. Unfortunately, a small vehicle rushed by and ran to the young girl. Therefore, after brief stop, the vehicle drove off. Then a second vehicle struck the girl again and rushed by without stopping. At least 18 people passed the serious injured girl before an old woman whom was later discovered to be collecting rubbish to make a living came to her rescue. After 8 day’s struggle in hospital, Wang Yue was died and left us forever. The incident has caused heated discussions leaves everyone deep in thought.